the Need for Words in Hypertexts
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Images in presentations are powerful resources which can easily illustrate or
even make an argument.
However, there is disticnct possibility that displaying an image will lead to a
false sense of presentation on the part of an author.
This sample illustrates what can go wrong when an author assumes that an image will
carry an argument.
The description which accompanies the picture merely states that the picture is an
example; it doesn't expand with any detail which might suggest HOW it is an example.
There is a certain pathos in the pile of dead fish, and the reader
understands that the author is trying to show environmental destruction,
but the accompanying description misses a great oppportunity for further clarification
and
presentation. Where is this lake? Can he reiterate the cause of this destruction
with specifics? How many other lakes are threatened? What should we do? Et cetera.
This is not, however, an issue inherent only to hypertextual composition. Beginning
writers often need encouragement
toward more specificity in their explanations. The challenge lies in turning this
tendency toward false presentation into an
opportunity for further clarification.
Select one of the other stuudent samples, move on to the conclusion,
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